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Bloody grounds, deafening sounds,
fear in everyone's eyes.
Adrenaline Rushes, weight that crushes,
under weeping skies.
Dodge to the right, never lose sight,
if you fall, always rise.
Thunder crashes, raining ashes,
scream your battle cries.
Crush their ranks, guard your flanks,
protect your comrades' lives.
Heave an exhausted sigh,
take a last look at the sky,
and pray to god,
that you don't die.
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i have no idea how to categorise it, so if ive done it wrong, please tell me.

Anywayz, I recently finished reading Eldest, sequal to Eragon. and at the end, theres a huge battle between The Varden and Galbatorix's army. while listening to an Avril Lavigne song thats called 'take me away' i randomly started writing poetry.
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:iconirideamagicalladle:
IRideAMagicalLadle Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:shakefish: THIS IS EPIC!!!!!!
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Usagi-Elric Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanx ^_^ thanx 4 tha fav! :heart:
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:iconirideamagicalladle:
IRideAMagicalLadle Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
almost anytime:icondummywooplz:
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:iconusagi-elric:
Usagi-Elric Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: ^_^
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Ohygglighet Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Inheritance Cycle ftw!
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Usagi-Elric Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
totes! im up to brisingr, and i cant hear that song without wanting to compose this poem all over again!
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TheOneFallenAngel Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's Perfect.
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Usagi-Elric Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanx ^_^ :heart:
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:icontheonefallenangel:
TheOneFallenAngel Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
~Np. :dummy:
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Usagi-Elric Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ :heart:
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